Verbs
are also said to be either active (The executive committee approved the
new policy) or passive (The new policy was approved by the
executive committee) in voice. In the active voice, the subject and verb
relationship is straightforward: the subject is a be-er or a do-er and the verb
moves the sentence along. In the passive voice, the subject of the
sentence is neither a do-er or a be-er, but is acted upon by some other agent or
by something unnamed (The new policy was approved). Computerized grammar
checkers can pick out a passive voice construction from miles away
and ask you to revise it to a more active construction. There is nothing
inherently wrong with the passive voice, but if you can say the same thing in
the active mode, do so (see exceptions below). Your text will have more pizzazz
as a result, since passive verb constructions tend to lie about in their
pajamas and avoid actual work.
We
find an overabundance of the passive voice in sentences created by
self-protective business interests, magniloquent educators, and bombastic military
writers (who must get weary of this accusation), who use the passive voice
to avoid responsibility for actions taken. Thus "Cigarette ads were
designed to appeal especially to children" places the burden on the
ads — as opposed to "We designedthe cigarette ads to appeal
especially to children," in which "we" accepts responsibility.
At a White House press briefing we might hear that "The President was
advised that certain members of Congress were being audited" rather than "The
Head of the Internal Revenue service advised the President that her
agency was auditing certain members of Congress" because the passive
construction avoids responsibility for advising and for auditing. One further
caution about the passive voice: we should not mix active and passive
constructions in the same sentence: "The executive committeeapproved the
new policy, and the calendar for next year's meetings was revised"
should be recast as "The executive committee approved the new
policy and revised the calendar for next year's meeting."
Take the quiz (below) as an exercise in
recognizing and changing passive verbs.
The passive voice does exist for a
reason, however, and its presence is not always to be despised. The passive is
particularly useful (even recommended) in two situations:
·
When it is more important to draw our
attention to the person or thing acted upon: The unidentified victim was
apparently struck during the early morning hours.
·
When the actor in the situation is not
important: The aurora borealis can be observed in the early
morning hours.
The
passive voice is especially helpful (and even regarded as mandatory) in
scientific or technical writing or lab reports, where the actor is not really
important but the process or principle being described is of ultimate importance.
Instead of writing "I poured 20 cc of acid into the beaker," we would
write "Twenty cc of acid is/was poured into the beaker."
The passive voice is also useful when describing, say, a mechanical process in
which the details of process are much more important than anyone's taking
responsibility for the action: "The first coat of primer paint is
applied immediately after the acid rinse."
We
use the passive voice to good effect in a paragraph in which we wish to shift
emphasis from what was the object in a first sentence to what becomes
the subject in subsequent sentences.
The
executive committee approved an entirely new policy for dealing with
academic suspension and withdrawal. The policy had been written by
a subcommittee on student behavior. If students withdraw from course work
before suspension can take effect, the policy states, a mark of "IW"
. . . .
The paragraph is clearly about this new
policy so it is appropriate that policy move from being the object in
the first sentence to being the subject of the second sentence. The passive voice
allows for this transition.
Passive
Verb Formation
The
passive forms of a verb are created by combining a form of the "to be
verb" with the past participle of the main verb. Other helping verbs are
also sometimes present: "The measure could have been killed in
committee." The passive can be used, also, in various tenses. Let's take a
look at the passive forms of "design."
Tense
|
Subject
|
Auxiliary
|
Past
Participle |
|
Singular
|
Plural
|
|||
Present
|
The car/cars
|
is
|
Are
|
designed.
|
Present perfect
|
The car/cars
|
has been
|
have been
|
designed.
|
Past
|
The car/cars
|
was
|
Were
|
designed.
|
Past perfect
|
The car/cars
|
had been
|
had been
|
designed.
|
Future
|
The car/cars
|
will be
|
will be
|
designed.
|
Future perfect
|
The car/cars
|
will have been
|
will have been
|
designed.
|
Present progressive
|
The car/cars
|
is being
|
are being
|
designed.
|
Past progressive
|
The car/cars
|
was being
|
were being
|
designed.
|
A
sentence cast in the passive voice will not always include an agent of
the action. For instance if a gorilla crushes a tin can, we could say "The
tin can was crushed by the gorilla." But a perfectly good
sentence would leave out the gorilla: "The tin can was crushed."
Also, when an active sentence with an indirect object is recast in the passive,
the indirect object can take on the role of subject in the passive sentence:
Active
|
Professor Villa gave Jorge an
A.
|
Passive
|
An A was given to Jorge by
Professor Villa.
|
Passive
|
Jorge was given an A.
|
Only
transitive verbs (those that take objects) can be transformed into passive
constructions. Furthermore, active sentences containing certain verbs cannot be
transformed into passive structures. To have is the most important of
these verbs. We can say "He has a new car," but we cannot say "A
new car is had by him." We can say "Josefina lacked finesse,"
but we cannot say "Finesse was lacked." Here is a brief list of such
verbs*:
resemble
|
look like
|
equal
|
agree with
|
Mean
|
contain
|
hold
|
comprise
|
Lack
|
suit
|
fit
|
become
|
Verbals in Passive Structures
Verbals or verb
forms can also take on features of the passive voice. An infinitive
phrase in the passive voice, for instance, can perform various functions within
a sentence (just like the active forms of the infinitive).
·
Subject: To be elected by my
peers is a great honor.
·
Object: That child really likes to
be read to by her mother.
·
Modifier: Grasso was the first woman to
be elected governor in her own right.
The same is true of passive gerunds.
·
Subject: Being elected by my
peers was a great thrill.
·
Object: I really don't like being
lectured to by my boss.
·
Object of preposition: I am so tired of being
lectured to by my boss.
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